Persuasive Writing

Hello This week were were asked to make a persuasive piece of writing on if videogames are harmful or helpful and i believe that they are harmful what do you think ? here is my persuasive writing  

A lot of people stay inside and play video games and don't do anything productive and i think they are bad for anyone. Do you think that videogames are bad ??? because i definitely do what do you think ???

I believe that videogames are harmful because you can get addicted to them and be stuck inside playing video games some video games can encourage bad behavior and fighting

Firstly Videogames Are addicted because people all around the world of all ages stay inside playing video games and don't do anything productive in there life . Most video games encourage bad behavior and fighting. Keith Diaz, an associate research scientist at the Columbia University Department of Medicine, has found that if you are sitting for a long period of time playing video games it encourages bad behaviors and can encourage early death

Some video games can help your hand eye coordination and helps improve your brain speed it can also help with your social skills when you talk to people online. Some games really help with your problem solving skills and working with a group some videogame are a great source of learning

Lastly, a study from the united states has said most video games make children more creative with learning such as minecraft, fortnite, Robloxs and many many more. There are more and more people playing video games everyday. Some people make a lot of money by playing video games by doing live streams and any people from all around the world can watch and give the person money and tips

In my opinion i think that videogames are bad because… when you play videogames most people get addicted to them also most video games encourage bad behavior and fighting but then some games you can learn things and learn problem solving and hand eye cordanishin