Persuasive Writing

Hello This week were were asked to make a persuasive piece of writing on if videogames are harmful or helpful and i believe that they are harmful what do you think ? here is my persuasive writing  

A lot of people stay inside and play video games and don't do anything productive and i think they are bad for anyone. Do you think that videogames are bad ??? because i definitely do what do you think ???

I believe that videogames are harmful because you can get addicted to them and be stuck inside playing video games some video games can encourage bad behavior and fighting

Firstly Videogames Are addicted because people all around the world of all ages stay inside playing video games and don't do anything productive in there life . Most video games encourage bad behavior and fighting. Keith Diaz, an associate research scientist at the Columbia University Department of Medicine, has found that if you are sitting for a long period of time playing video games it encourages bad behaviors and can encourage early death

Some video games can help your hand eye coordination and helps improve your brain speed it can also help with your social skills when you talk to people online. Some games really help with your problem solving skills and working with a group some videogame are a great source of learning

Lastly, a study from the united states has said most video games make children more creative with learning such as minecraft, fortnite, Robloxs and many many more. There are more and more people playing video games everyday. Some people make a lot of money by playing video games by doing live streams and any people from all around the world can watch and give the person money and tips

In my opinion i think that videogames are bad because… when you play videogames most people get addicted to them also most video games encourage bad behavior and fighting but then some games you can learn things and learn problem solving and hand eye cordanishin

Our Trip to Brunner Mine 2019

                   Our trip to brunner mine 
Yesterday our class went to Brunner Mine for the day. We learnt about when the big Brunner Mine disaster happened. I now know that 65 people died that day and a lot of family's dads, sons and uncles died that day. The youngest was only 15 years old and the oldest was 72 years old.  One of the people that died that day was not even meant to work and he had about 11 kids at home  so he wanted to work so he could feed them. 


After we learnt about the facts we  did a little play and we had to pretend that we were in class and we heard the explosion. We ran to the window and the teacher ran to the mine to see what had happened. 

Then we had our lunch. After  lunch we went to the graveyard where most of the men got buried.  There was 33 people that got buried in a big grave all together to be with their friends.  

Here is some photos of our trip.