Friday, 3 August 2018

My Treasure

This week we did writing a description on what  our personal treasure is. Here is my description. This was fun to do and I liked doing it. Maybe next time I could make my visual presentation more fun and interesting. I think I did a great job of this writing because I have lots of detail.  
WALT: use conjunctions to join our ideas together 
WALT include descriptive detail.  
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  1. Jazmine10 August 2018 at 10:26

    Kia Ora Ryah.
    I really like your post about your treasure, I like how you have alot of detail in your blog post, Maybe next time you could show a picture of your blanket.
    Bye Jazmine

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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