week 9 term 1

Today I  finished my writing about my Favourite thing and stuff like that so here is a link so you can see the writing that I did writing 

WALT make a interesting peace  of writing of things that been going on in the class room 

week 9 term 1

WALT: Write thank you letters using the appropriate format
Today I finished my letter to Mrs P. I did this because I did not go on camp so I  made a letter to my teachers I will be showing you the letter I did  Letter to Mrs P

week 9 term 1

Today I finished my letter to Mrs Clark The reason I did this is because I  did not go on camp so a stayed here at school and I made a letter to my teachers letter 

Week 9 term 1

Today we had to make a maths place value whats my number activity so I will put up a photo of it and you can see if you can work it out. This activity was really fun  and cool to do  

.WALT. pick a 4 or 5 digit number and make clues to see if they know what your number is . 

    

Metaphor poem week 9 term 1

Metaphor poem 

W.A.L.T Write metaphor that describes  yourself.

This was so fun to do I loved doing it . 

week 7 term 1

This week my class went on camp I  decided that I did not want to go so I stayed in M2 for 1/2  of the week in M1 for the rest of the week and what I did was we went out side and we had to write down what we can see what we can hear and had a big list of things like trees bush leaves  and so so much more we had to be in little groups and I was with Maya and Summer they also did not want to go on camp so they stayed with me in M1 and M2 and this week my class went to Tehiringa and we got 3 words to pick from and I pick roto  witch means in so here is  a photo of my work  that I did. 

 

  thanks hope you enjoy 

Problem Solving

Hi Today we did this activity of how many different  ways can you write 679.   This is it.  It was pretty fun to do so I want to know if you have any ways of writing it that I did not do. Here is   my challenge can you do it ???
WALT . solve maths problem using place value and basic facts.  

Nikau palm tree writing

This week we had  to do a peace of writing about the Nikita palm tree so I am going to show you my peace  of writing that I did this week the top bit the teachers made so we know what to do   hope you enjoy this bye .

Nikau Palm

       

WALT:   - write a descriptive paragraph - use a variety of descriptive words to make my writing interesting

Topic: Nikau Palm Audience: GMS, worldwide blog audience Purpose: To clearly describe the features of a nikau palm so people can recognise and identify it in the school environment

Text type: Description Task: You are going to describe to your audience what a nikau palm looks like and its identifying features.  Remember to use a variety of descriptive words and phrases so you create a picture in your reader’s mind.   Model

Key Vocabulary: Use your describe bubble as the basis for your description. Click on this link to see some more words you could include.

Structure: Topic Sentence: Introduces the topic by giving a basic sentence describing what the paragraph is going to be about. Supporting sentences: Provides the detail of the tree from top to bottom to create the picture in the reader’s mind (sensory detail, adjectives). Tell about it’s features, where it grows and what it does. Concluding sentence: Sums up the important detail and gives an overall impression of the topic.

Check and Share 1. Check your writing with a buddy or yourself using the Paragraph checker. RUBRIC.   2. Highlight the descriptive vocabulary you have used in your paragraph. 3. Copy and paste your description into a google drawing, add images then post on your blog.

Use this to plan your ideas

Topic Sentence: the nikau palm tree is a beautiful  plant in the nature of new zealand The nïkau palm is a tree  to New Zealand and i was found in the North Island and the northern South Island from the Marlborough Sounds and Nelson south to near Okarito in the west and Banks Peninsula near Christchurch in the east

Support #1: on the branch it is spiky  and really rufe   like a hundred nails on a fluffy blanket

Support #2 The leaves are pointy and green like an trangla shape like a  big mountain.

Support #3:its a  new zealand tree that we found the nikau palm is the only native tree to new zealand  .

Concluding sentence:They are a pretty tree that  are in new zealand with green pointy leaves and a brown  trunk that is bumpy and it's like  dirty dirt  and  is the only native tree to new zealand.

all about me

HI I'm back how are you .my name is Ryah and i go to Grey main school in Mamaku 2 I am 10 years old my birthday is the 1st of August i have one sister name Ivy and one brother named Caleb my dads name is Corey And my mums name is Lauren my teacher is Mrs prendergast my bffs are Maya Zyah and my bcf are Summer Milan and Isla  and Shari and lot more I have a really big family with 24 people in my family and probably way  more  my hobby's are art and going on my phone playing with my cousin Isla my Favourite subjects are maths and art