hamner hot pools

We are learning to write an explanation to explain a scientific phenomenon. what we have to do is Write an explanation that explains why and how the water gets hot in the hot pools at Hanmer. the reason we are doing this work is because we went to hamner for our camp this year so we wanted to know why and how the water was hot here is the writing I did on this

Hello every today I am going  to teach you how the hot pools in hanmer are hot  so when you go there you will know how the water is hot In the little town hamner there are some natural hot pools there that you can go to and relax over the time they have built a couple hydro slides,lazy river,lap pools and they have got a nice cafe there now where you can get pizzas and lot of other stuff. Here is hot the pools are hot New zealand is in the start of the ring of fire the ring of fire is a ring that goes over some countries and corse’s some big earthquakes and bad volcanoes and    in New Zealand the main fault is called the alpine fault and over the years the ground will crack and the rainwater will go down the crack and the water is 2 km down under ground it is so close to the earth core the water get very very hot it will take about 180 years for the water to come back up to go in to the hot pool the people that own the hot pools have put a long pipe down so the water will get sucked up and it will not take as long for the water to come back up New zealand is in the ring of fire that means there is tectonic plates that move and crash together then when it rains and snows the water will go down the cracks from the earth quakes and it will go down into a little pond and the water is so close to the plates the water will heat up and rise up and that's how we have hot pools