Writing

Today I finished my writing on a fairy tale and make it your own but keep  some of the characters and make their personality different so I picked the fairy tale  Little Red Riding Hood and changed the name to Little Blue Ridding Hood and in my story she is bad and the wolf is good and granny is bad too so here is my writing I hope you enjoy it I think it is good but maybe next time I could add some new charters in the story that I make 

Daddy can I have a bedtime story please “ of course you can “             One day long long ago …

There was a wolf a granny and a little girl called little blue riding hood  she was very bad not many people liked her because she eats people. And then one day she went to the wolfs house and he was so scared about that he did not  open the door but she new the wolf was in there so she smashed down the door and said do you want to be eaten and he rang granny to come over and then he hang up but then little blue riding hood  ate him and then granny ran in and said what the hell are you doing and then little blue riding hood ate her too but then she spit her back out and she said I am really sorry about that and she said that's okay but don't do again but then the wood chopper came in so granny ate him in second later there was a old man named Greg and he was little blue riding hood's dad  he was a really nice man everybody in town loved him because he was so kind and nice. So one day 7 years ago Greg turned bad then little blue riding hood turned bad then all of the people that lived in the town would not even be on the same street as him because he was starting to eat people and that's the day little red riding hood started to be bad but then the wood copper came into there house one day and chopped the door down and said I am sick of you eating our people that live in this town so he ate Greg and then little blue riding hood and the town lived happily ever after the End  

Goodnight daddy thanks for reading me little blue riding hood